This week in T2 we have been learning how to write a narrative and this is mine
The unknown world
It was stormy and very early in the morning in the town square the trees were howling and the bushes were rustling everybody was in the houses. It was just around 2.00 in the morning. Then out of nowhere came two enomese trucks and inside where many people wearing black clothing on their shirts were shiny golden beige shaped as a star. Suddenly they started looking around the town square and then started to break into people's houses then Tracy's father and mother came running to the window and said to Tracy to go and get her little brother danle so she ran up the stairs and stopped in the middle and looked back her parents looked worried and started to run around the living room trying to pack some supplies so she kept running up the stairs and woke up her little brother Daniel. Tracy and Daniel were coming down the stairs then with a blink of an eye there were lights heading towards the door there mother and father told Tracy and danale to lay down on the floor so they did what they were told and dropped down to the floor the father ran towards the lights on the wall and quickly turned them off. A few minutes later the lights were gone the mother and the father grabbed what they could and told Tracy to take Danial up stairs to get some things then the door swag open and in can the man dressed in black with gold shiny bags on their shirts the mother and father froze and looked around the room for somewhere to hide but it was too late the man in black clothing grabbed both of them and took them to the Truck but when Tracy and Daniel came down stairs they saw that the door was open and that there parents were not around. They searched the whole house but they could not find them then they saw all the trucks drive off in the back of the trucks Tracy saw her mother and father yelling out to “HELP US” so Tracy ran out to help them but it was too late they were already gone. So she closed the door and decided to go to bed and hope it was just a dream. At 4.00 in the morning Tracy awoke and woke up Danial. She ran down the stairs to see if what happened last night was just a dream but it was not. Tracy started to cry and told Daniel that they were going on a Adventure to find their parents so that morning she and her brother set off to find their parents. Tracy look around the room for her mothers handbag then she found it, it was sitting on the kitchen table then Tracy took danals hand and went to the nearest subway station to see if they could by a ticket but when Tracy went to pay for the ticket a note was sitting on the top she paid for the tickets and got onto the train she opened the bag and pulled out the note and read it, it said (Dear Tracey there are some people coming for me and your father i don’t know why but they have taken us to an unknown place there is a locket in my bag put it on and it will get you the way to find us love mother) She put the note back into the bag and look for the locket it was shaped as a star and was a pretty yellow kind of colour she put it on and she could see which way to go and witch way not to. minutes after minutes hours after hours they waited until the star around her neck started sparkling then she said to the person driving the train to stop and her and her little brother got off the train and followed the way of the star they ended up in places they have never been before then out of nowhere Daniel spotted the truck's speed up behind them Tracy told her brother to run but he had tripped and the man dressed in black came and pick him up and put him in the back of the truck that his parents were in then Tracy looked scared then her parents yelled run Tracy run before her eye there was a man walking up to her he was about to grab her then she made a run for it she ran around the corner and down the street the man was following her until she crossed the road the man had lost the site of Tracy. The star glowed again and the trucks drove off. Tracy followed the trucks but they were driving too fast she could not keep up. Then she came across this bridge the trucks drove across and she followed trying not to get spotted then she was at the end of the bridge and saw something she had never seen before it was an unknown world it was so beautiful she had to stop to think why the man would take her parents to such a great place that they never knew existed until now. The trucks stopped and the man jumped out and grabbed Tracy's parents and her little brother Daniel they took them to the unknown world and said you will be safe here from now on you are not allowed to leave this world it is to dangerous then Tracy picks up a stick and runs towards then but they grabbed her and put her with her family. The man said in a soft voice that you are the chosen ones.
...THE END TO BE CONTINUED...
